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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 12:10 pm

    I always thought the funnest thing about other forums that I went on was kicking other peoples butt in contests!(JK... ok, well maybe not) So, I decided to make one! And out of all the types of contests I picked the one that the most people would hate! YAY FOR POETRY! Thats rite. Its pretty simple. Post a poem that YOU wrote. Once i have enough peeps I shall judge them with the help of a random person thats not on the forum. Then there will be a winner and you get a inviable cookie. Congrats *shakes hand* Have a nice day.

    So... go ahead. Post some poems. (I have a feeling this will fail.)

    PEEPS IN THE CONTEST:

    ~Rachel:

    I suck at haiku.
    My haikus are very bad.
    But this one's okay.

    ~Janet:

    April’s Sun, warming resuscitating souls

    April’s Wind, rubbing gorgeous blossoms and drifting pollen
    April’s Thunder, tracing away last foot steps of cold winter

    April’s Rain, moistening young leaves
    April’s Mountain, dressing in tender green

    April’s River, rolling on cool waves


    April’s Flower, enjoying kisses of honey bees

    April’s Bird, singing sweetly to each others
    April’s Heart, filling with rejuvenation from mother earth


    ~Jordan:

    Needs to get hers!






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    Post by ZoruaTheAether on Tue Jul 26, 2011 12:33 pm

    I suck at haiku.
    My haikus are very bad.
    But this one's okay.

    ...I really do suck at poems.


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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:33 pm

    I love poems! And I am pretty good at them too. I have over 10 poems I can submit...this is going to be hard to pick one! Can I post multiple here? Well I am going to anyways Razz
    August:
    The year has turned it circle,
    The seasons come and go,
    It is August, and the harvest has grown.

    People busy cutting, hands swinging,
    Cart with wheels squeaking,
    Machine humming, grinding, screeching.

    The rest has come,
    The field is calm and charm,
    Only to find that harvest continues,
    and has to be done in a short time!


    The Power of Music:
    Music brings us all together,
    in any kind of whether,
    and it does not matter,
    which type of music is better.

    Music can move,
    Music can heal,
    Music can sooth,
    Music can excel.

    Music is for any emotion,
    Music can really open up imagination;
    Music is for any day,
    Music can make every day a special day.

    Music brings us all together,
    to create and interpret better,
    to make everyone feel better,
    and to live a better life all together.


    Pianist:
    A wonderful musician understands the emotions of a composer,

    And whose music speaks the accent of the music composer.

    A wonderful pianist is a wonderful musician,

    Also one who can make any piano sing the music!


    April:
    April’s Sun, warming resuscitating souls

    April’s Wind, rubbing gorgeous blossoms and drifting pollen
    April’s Thunder, tracing away last foot steps of cold winter

    April’s Rain, moistening young leaves
    April’s Mountain, dressing in tender green

    April’s River, rolling on cool waves


    April’s Flower, enjoying kisses of honey bees

    April’s Bird, singing sweetly to each others
    April’s Heart, filling with rejuvenation from mother earth


    Pure Love:
    Love needs understanding, tolerance, and gratitude;

    Love does not need envies, insolence, and bragging;

    Love has no shame, no selfishness, and no angriness;

    Love has no blame, no unjust, only truthfulness;

    Love is believing, anticipating, and patient;

    True Love never stops…


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    Post by jea150174 on Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:44 pm

    Cool!

    I'll post one tomorrow cause I left my notebook at the middle school Smile
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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:46 pm

    jea150174 wrote:Cool!

    I'll post one tomorrow cause I left my notebook at the middle school Smile
    Wait, you are going to the Middle School? Oh right, Consortium. When does that end?


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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:37 pm

    Ok, thaks everyone! And janet, i like all of them but could you just pick one. It would be a bit of an advantage if you had multiple.
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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:39 pm

    sigh. Now i want to put ups a poem 2. Ok, though i cant actually enter because you know... im judging. I iz going 2 post one any way. Tells me what you think. I have been writing poems scince third grade and and on multiple writing forums and diviant art! (I haz some fallowers on DA)
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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:52 pm

    What am I?
    For when I'm gone
    No memories will last to long
    A leaf will fall
    A tree will miss
    A new one grows
    A quiet bliss
    In leaf decay
    My memories play
    Is that leaf me?
    To soon be gone
    Forgoten by a new days dawn


    A drop of ink
    A hallow tear
    A missing note
    A poet’s fear
    We sing to life
    It whips out backs
    Blue and black
    Black and blue
    And crimson too
    It flows like wind
    Through a dying tree
    The words like water
    A bitter sweet sea
    We search for something
    That does not exist
    A broken soul
    Where the pencil kissed
    We break our limits
    We go insane
    We take the drug
    A poem
    To sweeten pain


    (This is a newer one. Its a type of poem called a villanelle. It has an aa b aa b patern. With sertin repeats on the first a)

    Dancing on a soldiers lance
    Her blinded eyes. A grey cast shown
    To the mourner's song she takes her stance
    Toward the edge she leaps in sorrows trance
    A leap toward death as she has known
    Dancing on a soldiers lance
    With grace and beauty, a thoughtless dance
    She cannot hear the fighting roar or dyeing moan
    To the mourner's song she takes her stance
    Mindless in her swift, gliding balance
    Emotionless movement, sunk to her bone
    Dancing on a soldiers lance
    Spinning, bounding, endless prance
    Gliding on the surface, heart cold as stone
    To the mourner's song she takes her stance
    Her soul is still to her bodies dance
    Quieter the song has grown
    Dancing on a soldiers lance
    To the mourners song she takes her stance


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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:53 pm

    ^^^^^^^^^^ Just tell me what you think. Incase you didnt read my previous post. Im not actually enterng these I just want some crit.
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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:28 pm

    I really like the poems. I think the flow is pretty good...but overall it is great! When I get time to look at it more, I will give you more criticism.
    The poems I would choose (from the four I posted) would be April or Power of Music. I don't know which one is better :|


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    Post by BobTheConquere on Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:32 pm

    I put up april. I like that one.
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    Post by P-Dawg98 on Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:16 pm

    cake a cka k caKEK AKC KAe ka cke akc kea k cka ek kcxa ke kc ak ek akc eka kc kae akc kae akc kae akd k cka eka dkc ake akc akea cka ek acka eka ck ake kc ake Delicious
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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Mon Aug 08, 2011 5:01 pm

    Sarah, in your first poem, the 3rd line, it should be "too" and not "to".


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    Post by tuxlord123 on Mon Aug 08, 2011 6:35 pm

    I don't care if I'm in it or not I'm entering!

    POEM:
    I do not like purple
    'cause I'm fond of blue
    I think your like purple
    'cause I hate you too

    ...............




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    Post by P-Dawg98 on Tue Aug 09, 2011 7:24 pm

    ugfo ahgk jf hgt arsjnfvakgh agv dlk gf lkjg ghe rtidjgblxgvldfrgj djf sjjgl oihg obkfjf lkjhgljedh ohfsdlk lkjhl bl lfjgboi oihboix dfblkf djhjdlksfbikdflkg jdlfsk hlksdhdslk hbdfl;kjh lkdjh lkdsj glkj glk afro i Sleepy Worm
    there's abstract art and now there's abstract poetry
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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Tue Aug 09, 2011 11:36 pm

    What kind of poetry would that be?


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    Post by P-Dawg98 on Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:27 pm

    abstract poetry Embarassed derp
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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:30 pm

    I have no clue what 2 out of 3 words in your post mean Razz


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    Post by P-Dawg98 on Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:39 pm

    I'm assuming you know what poetry means so abstract as in abstract art means the art is random with no real picture or whatever; there's just a bunch of colors or shapes. So, abstract poetry is a bunch of random letters or symbols written in a type of verse. Ask Eli about the derp because he's the one who uses it the most affraid
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    Post by jea150174 on Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:27 pm

    Question
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    Post by ZoruaTheAether on Fri Aug 19, 2011 9:10 pm

    Janet doesn't know what abstract means? LE GASP


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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Sat Aug 20, 2011 8:58 am

    No, my English vocabulary is terrible. Sorry.


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    Post by P-Dawg98 on Tue Aug 23, 2011 7:37 pm

    I can agree with that, but still... bounce
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    Post by ZoruaTheAether on Tue Aug 23, 2011 10:11 pm

    Oh, so is Sara's.


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    Post by YLG Pianonerd on Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:46 am

    Yeah...English was my second language.


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